Friday, 26 March 2010

Screen Grabs













Tuesday, 23 March 2010

final video

video

Friday, 12 March 2010

Rough Cut

Feed Back

Mise-en-scene.
At the beginning, when showing the pictures of the dead people, the props were used really well and it helps show you an insight into the narrative.

Camera work.
The panning across photos is very effective.
Fade to white seems out of place.

Sound.
In the early section when panning across the photos the music is really affective, there was a constant ticking sound which doesn't really fit. It may have been picked up when filming.
The music was really good as it matched the tension.

Conventions.
The ending title could come earlier to make it look less like a trailer.

Editing.
Nice use of a flash back and a good quick pace.

We agree with all areas of our feed back, particularly the comment out the ticking sound made by the camera which we will now take out. We will also work to change the ending where the title appears and either speed it up or change it to something different. We now intend to complete the soundtrack and make our editing more disorientating, which we believe will make the sequence more interesting.

Thursday, 4 March 2010

Tuesday, 2 March 2010

Story Board

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We forgot to upload this before but here it is.